Monthly Archives: December 2014

Review- A Day of Fire: A Novel of Pompeii by Stephanie Dray, Ben Kane, E. Knight, Sophie Perinot, Kate Quinn and Vicky Shecter

I received a review copy of this novel from one of the authors.

A Day of FireNot only did the topic of this book interest me, but also the unique format with which it was written.  This is the tale of those who witnessed the last hours of the famous, or infamous, city of Pompeii that was buried in 79 A.D. by the ash and soot of Mt. Vesuvius.  There are a total of 6 different stories in the collection, all written by 6 different authors.  Several of the characters do overlap, however, seamlessly throughout the narratives.  For instance, the prostitute that The Younger Pliny visits in the first story, has a tale in her own words at the end of the collection.  The stories feature men and women from different social strata during the time of the Roman Empire: a senator, an ex-soldier, a wealthy merchant and an heiress, just to name a few.

The strongest story in the collection is that which surrounds a young girl of fifteen who is an heiress to a large wine fortune.  Aemilia is betrothed to marry a man that is much older than her and whom she did not choose.  This situation, of course, is not uncommon among the Roman upper class who are trying to guard the virtue of their daughters and the continuance of their vast fortunes.  Although she has known Sabinus for her entire life, Aemilia has never had any romantic feelings for him.  But her father wants to ensure a safe and secure match for his only daughter.  As the wedding day approaches, and Vesuvius erupts, we are left to wonder if the wedding will ever take place.  I found the characters in this story the most developed and interesting of the entire collection.

As the fates of the various characters unfold in each story, the big question that lingers is who will survive and who will be swallowed up by the volcano?  The destruction of Vesuvius makes no class distinctions and everyone, whether Patrician, Plebian or slave is not exempt from its impending doom.  The suspense that lingers in each story is also a strength of the book.

I can understand the need to educate the reader about Roman customs, but some of the details given in the stories felt unnecessary and even cumbersome and pedantic.  At times the stories had a bit of a textbook feel and the minutiae interrupted the flow of the story.  For example, the extended description of Pliny The Younger’s first experience at a brothel was more detailed than it needed to be and superfluous to the advancement of the plot.  In fact, there are a lot of details about sex, brothels, and prostitutes in this book; such lasciviousness is a stereotype that so many historical fiction books set in Rome tend to dwell upon.  Furthermore, the scenes of fighting in the arena between two gladiators sounded a lot like the PowerPoint presentation I give my students when I am teaching about Roman forms of entertainment.

I do applaud the authors for using so many Latin words to describe various Roman objects, ideas and customs.  However, I wonder if this is distracting to a reader who does not know Latin?  I would image that, to fully appreciate the context of words such as cacator, viridarium, aedile, etc., there must be a lot of Internet searches involved with reading this book.  Maybe an index of Latin terms might have been useful to the reader?

Overall, this book captures the terror that the victims of mighty Vesuvius most certainly would have experienced in their final moments.  If you want to learn more about Roman culture during the 1st Century A.D. then I recommend A DAY OF FIRE.

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Guest Post: Author Marie Savage On How to Begin An Historical Fiction Novel

 

Today I welcome Marie Savage to The Book Binder’s Daughter who is writing about her new book Oracles of Delphi and her process of beginning an historical fiction novel.  I invite you to read her interesting guest post, enter to win your own copy of her book and visit the other stops on the tour.

Great beginnings: Setting the historical scene to keep the reader turning the pages

As a writer, editor, publisher, and avid reader, I think a lot about how to draw a reader into a story and keep them turning the pages. All good stories must have a powerful beginning that not only hooks the reader immediately, but also sets the mood and gives tantalizing clues about what is to come. In historical fiction, the beginning has to do even more work—it has to transport the reader to a time and place that may be completely unfamiliar.

9780989207935-Perfect.inddThere are many ways to grab a reader from the very first line and first paragraphs, and in writing ORACLES OF DELPHI, set in 340 BCE, I think I tried them all before I got it “right.” I probably rewrote the first chapter fifty times, and that’s no exaggeration. Ultimately, I believe, a successful beginning boils down to a deft use of tension and in ORACLES, the first paragraph plunges the reader directly into the story, gives a sense of the time period, and sets up the tension between two characters:

Nikos’s heart pounded against his rib cage like a siege engine. He pressed his back into the stone wall, closed his eyes, and tried to calm his breathing. He couldn’t believe he’d been such a fool. “Next time I’ll surrender the prize,” Charis had always promised. Next time he would claim it, he always hoped. But instead….

He pulled himself to the top of the wall and lay flat. The moment of escape calmed him. The gates of the Sacred Precinct were locked, and he’d had to climb out the same way he’d climbed in. On the way out, though, he wasn’t carrying a body.

He glanced to his side, toward the theater, and then down to the Temple of Apollon where he’d left Charis’s body for the priests to find. Stars winked in and out as clouds drifted across the black dome blanketing the night sky. He crouched, reached for a nearby branch, and swung down to land on the ground with a soft thud.

Does it work? With references to the siege engine, the Sacred Precinct, and the Temple of Apollon, does it put you in the scene and in the time period? Will it keep you reading? I hope so. Here’s one of my favorite beginnings, this one by Deborah Lincoln whose book, AGNES CANON’S WAR, I edited and published.

Agnes Canon saw a woman hanged on the way to the Pittsburgh docks. The rope snapped taut, and a hiss rose from the watching crowd like steam from a train engine. The woman dangled, ankles lashed together, hooded head canted at an impossible angle, skirt flapping lazily in the breeze. A sharp pang of sorrow shot through Agnes though she knew little of the woman’s story.

I love this first paragraph because it puts you right into the story. In the first line, we read “Agnes Canon saw a woman hanged on the way to the Pittsburgh docks” but we don’t know why she was going to the docks—does she work there? Is she meeting someone there? Or is she going on a journey, leaving from the docks to parts unknown? Second, we know immediately that the story is set in a time during which hangings were done in public and steam engines were common. Third, the description of the woman’s body dangling with “ankles lashed together, hooded head canted at an impossible angle, skirt flapping lazily in the breeze” grabs the reader and immediately begs the question: what was this woman’s crime? Last, we discover that although Agnes knows little of the woman’s story, she knows enough to feel sorry for her, and that sympathy tells the reader something of Agnes’s character.

A good beginning should not be loaded down with adjectives and adverbs, but careful use of descriptive language can be effective in setting the mood, anchoring a story in time and place, and evoking a particular atmosphere. Below is the first paragraph from SLANT OF LIGHT, an award-winning Civil War-era novel from Steve Wiegenstein.

The keelboat moved so slowly against the current that Turner sometimes wondered if they were moving at all. Keeping a steady rhythm, Pettibone and his son worked the poles on the quarter-sized boat they had built to ply the smaller rivers that fed the Mississippi. Whenever the current picked up, Turner took the spare pole and tried to help, but although he was tall and muscular, with a wide body that didn’t narrow from shoulders to hips, poling a boat wasn’t as simple as it looked. He pushed too soon, too late, missed the bottom, stuck the pole in the mud, all to the amusement of Pettibone’s son, Charley. And with every stroke, Turner asked himself: What in all creation am I doing here?

In this paragraph, we know immediately that the story is set in the past as keelboats are not common modes or transport these days. And we know that Turner, who is tall and muscular, is unused to working the poles—something even a young boy can do. Turner is clearly a guest on the keelboat or has hired Pettibone and Charley to transport him. But transport him where? We know the boat is plying a tributary of the Mississippi, but what is Turner doing there and where is he going? The last line sets up the rest of the novel, hinting that discovering why Turner is on that keelboat in the first place is at the heart of the story.

What are your favorite first paragraphs and what elements draw you in and keep you turning the pages?

-Marie Savage

About The Author:

02_Marie Savage_Author PhotoMarie Savage is the pen name of Kristina Marie Blank Makansi who always wanted to be a Savage (her grandmother’s maiden name) rather than a Blank. She is co-founder and publisher of Blank Slate Press, an award-winning small press in St. Louis, and founder of Treehouse Author Services. Books she has published and/or edited have been recognized by the Independent Book Publishers Association (IBPA), the Independent Publisher Book Awards (IPPY), the Beverly Hills Book Awards, the David J. Langum, Sr. Prize in American Historical Fiction, the British Kitchie awards, and others. She serves on the board of the Missouri Center for the Book and the Missouri Writers Guild. Along with her two daughters, she has authored The Sowing and The Reaping (Oct. 2014), the first two books of a young adult, science fiction trilogy. Oracles of Delphi, is her first solo novel.

Giveaway:

Marie is giving away one copy of her book (US/CAN).  Just leave me a comment below and let me know you want to win.  It’s that easy!  One winner will be chosen on Jan.9th and notified via email.  The winner will have 48 hours to respond.

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Review-Far and Near: On Days Like These by Neil Peart

I was thrilled when I received a review copy of this book from the publisher, ECW Press.  Travel writing is one of my favorite genres and I have read, and enjoyed, a few of the other travel memoirs written by this author.  And as a further disclaimer, I have enjoyed listening to and going to Rush concerts for many, many years.  However, as far as Rush’s music is concerned, I tend to be more of a Geddy Lee fan (sorry Neil).

My Review:

Far and NearIn the intro to his work, Neil Peart makes it a point to discuss the art of writing and the special attention he gives to his craft.  Although the writings which are contained in this book first appeared as a series of pieces on his blog, Neil puts quite a bit of effort in perfecting this collection for his audience.  He sites the Roman poet Ovid: “If the art is concealed, it succeeds.”  The passage to which Neil refers is actually from Ovid’s story about the artist Pygmalion from his epic poem The Metmorphoses. 

Pygmalion cannot find the perfect woman, who is chaste and wholesome and faithful and matches his ideal of what a perfect woman should be.  So as an artist and sculptor he decides to make his own “woman.”  As he is working with the ivory, the figure of a woman he sculpts is so flawless that one would think she is alive.  The brilliance of Pygmalion’s art hides the fact that his sculpture is indeed art and not actually alive.

Like Pygmalion, Neil strives to perfect his art, whether it be drumming or writing, so that all the listener or reader sees is the seamless, finished product. Far and Near is first and foremost a travelogue of Neil Peart’s trips on his motorcycle from venue to venue while he is on tour with his band.  His narratives take place over a three year period of time, on the second leg of the band’s “Time Machine Tour” and on all three legs of the band’s “Clockwork Angel’s Tour.”  When the book opens, Neil is on the road in April with his longtime friend and riding partner, Michael.  I have lived on the east coast of the United States all my life but Neil’s detailed description of springtime in this part of the country, as different flowers are resurrected and animals start to peak out of their winter hibernation, makes me appreciate it all the more.  The vivid depictions of every place he travels, whether it be in the extreme heat of the desert or perilous roads of the British countryside or the brutal cold of a Canadian winter, makes one want to visit and experience these places for oneself.  Isn’t this the true mark of a successful travel memoir?

Far and Near is so much more than a travelogue.  It is also a book of wonderful photography, a brief history of many small towns in North American and Europe and a history of the flora and fauna of those places as well.  The book further serves as a personal memoir of the author as he reminisces about previous experiences at each place he visits. Not only are pictures of the various touring destinations included in the book, but there are also descriptions of the photographic techniques that are employed for different situations.

A point is made to capture many of the small towns where these “shunpikers” (those who purposely avoid the most direct roads from one point to another) ride and oftentimes an interesting history is provided about these out-of-the-way places.  As a classicist, I was particularly impressed that Neil gives a bit of the history of Roman occupation of Britain as he is riding around the English countryside.

Finally, the book captures the life of a musician both on the road and off.  The band’s triumphant introduction into the Rock-And-Roll Hall of Fame is related at length in one of the entries.  Neil would not be “on the road” going from place to place, after all, if it were not for his job with a touring rock band.  Although this is certainly not the sole focus of the book, the reader is led to understand what the emotional and physical effects of constant touring and months on the road can cause.  The stories about his young daughter, Olivia, who doesn’t quite understand that “Daddy is at work” are particularly touching.  It is also entertaining to read about the many other crew members that all contribute to making a successful show possible; from the drum technician, to Neil’s riding partners, to the bus driver, to the crew members who entertain the band by dressing up in a chicken suit, it truly takes a small village to put on a show every night.  The sum of all these moving parts means that, once again, the art conceals the art.

Far and Near appeals to a very broad audience of readers; if you enjoy travel writing, memoirs, photography, or the music of Rush you will want to read this book.  In the end, the gods grant Pygmalion his wish and they make his statue become a live woman.  Neil Peart, through his book, makes the art of traveling, writing, playing music and his quest to live his life to the fullest come fully alive to his readers.

About The Author:

Neil PeartNeil Peart is a Canadian musician and author. He is best-known as the drummer and lyricist for the rock band Rush.

Peart grew up in Port Dalhousie, Ontario, Canada (now part of St. Catharines) working the occasional odd job. However, his true ambition was to become a professional musician. During adolescence, he floated from regional band to regional band and dropped out of high school to pursue a career as a full-time drummer. After a discouraging stint in England to concentrate on his music, Peart returned home, where he joined local Toronto band Rush in the summer of 1974.

Early in his career, Peart’s performance style was deeply rooted in hard rock. He drew most of his inspiration from drummers such as Keith Moon and John Bonham, players who were at the forefront of the British hard rock scene. As time progressed, however, he began to emulate the jazz and big band musicians Gene Krupa and Buddy Rich. Peart is also a pupil of jazz instructor Freddie Gruber. Peart has received many awards for his musical performances and is known for his technical proficiency and stamina.

In addition to being a musician, Peart is also a prolific writer, having published several memoirs about his travels. Peart is also Rush’s primary lyricist. In writing lyrics for Rush, Peart addressed universal themes and diverse subject matter including science fiction, fantasy, and philosophy, as well as secular, humanitarian and libertarian themes. In contrast, his books have been focused on his personal experiences

 

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Review- Lorna Doone: A Romance of Exmoor by R.D. Blackmore

This book has been on my “to read” list for a long time.  When someone, whose opinion I highly value, recommended that I read the book, I immediately picked it up.  My only regret is that I waited so long to finally read Lorna Doone.  Originally published in 1869, R.D. Blackmore sets his book on the wild frontier of Exmoor, England where the Crown does not have complete control over the land.

My Review:

Lorna DooneThe plethora of interesting aspects to this book makes it difficult to decide about which ones to write.  John Ridd is a young boy living in the wilds of western England in the 17th century, when his father is murdered by a band of outlaws who torment, bully and rob the farmers and good people of Exmoor.  The Doones occupy their own outlaw village and not only survive by robbing those around them but also prey on the their neighbors for sport.  When John Ridd’s father stands up to these bullies, he is murdered and leaves behind his widow, Sarah Ridd, his prosperous farm, and his three children.

Although John grows up without the guidance of his father, he develops into an upstanding, strong and honest man.  Never for a minute does John harbor resentment or a grudge against the Doones.  If he had let hate and vengeance consume him, his heart would never have been open to receive the love of Lorna Doone and he would have missed out on the greatest love of his life.  What impressed me most about these star-crossed lovers is that they refuse to let the sins of their families ruin their happiness.  R.D. Blackmore has created a character in John Ridd that is an enduring moral example for all ages.

Despite unfortunate circumstances and countless obstacles, the zeal of John and Lorna’s love never wanes.  John’s thoughts and actions are always carried out with his love in mind, no matter how long it has been since he has beheld her face.  This romance is an interesting lesson for those of us in the 21st century who are accustomed to social media, Skype, text messaging, and any number of gadgets that keep us constantly in connection with one another.  We do not have to wait days and weeks for a letter from a loved one or travel on an extended and tedious journey to reach our beloved.  In this age of “out of site, out of mind,” would a man and woman be so patient, faithful and enduring in their love as John and Lorna?

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Oare Church in Exmoor

The plot is also one of the factors that made me devour this book.  The reader is kept in constant suspense wondering whether or not the evil villians, in the form of the Doones, and especially their leader Carver Doone, will get their just deserts.  Will anyone come to the aid of the innocent people of Exmoor to stomp out these bullies, or will John Ridd and his neighbors take matters into their own hands?  John’s cousin, Tom Faggus, who is also a highway robber, has many interesting parts in the storyline.  Although, as a counterexample to the Doones, he robs the rich and gives the spoils to the poor.  R.D. Blackmore kept me guessing the various fates and outcomes of his characters until the very end.

R.D. Blackmore’s tale has the perfect formula for a great novel: romance, adventure, a bucolic setting, and indelible characters.  The tale of John Ridd has truly captured my heart and like all my favorite classic books, it will be one of those that I will reread again and again.

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Happy Holidays

Christmas MessageThis time of year is one to reflect on and learn from what the what the year has brought us.  Although I had been writing book review on various sites, this was the first year I decided to put my thoughts down in a specific place for people to read.  It is a daunting task, since one is essentially putting one’s thoughts, tastes and ideas in a very public place for the whole world to see.  Believe it or not, I have always been a naturally shy person so exposing my thoughts and a small piece of my life on a place like The Internet has been a great personal challenge.

My goal has been to spread the love of reading, connect with likeminded lovers of books, and to give away a few books in the process.  I could never have anticipated how much I would learn through this endeavor or make such meaningful connections that would enhance my life.  There are a few special people in particular whose acquaintance I have made through my blog for which I am eternally grateful.  Thanks to everyone who has made a comment, read a post or even picked up a book because of my recommendation.  May your holiday season be happy and merry and bright.  -Melissa

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